Hi Julie and Kristy Sorry for the delayed feedback this week - I've been healthy sick! Anyways, overall, very nicely done. I appreciate that you chose to focus on the topic of applications available to track the menstrual cycle. We too chose to look at the wealth of applications available advertised to promote fertility prediction and contraception awareness. I think that the availability of these technologies are immensely important for women, many of whom may have never taken the time to actually understand their cycles until the information became readily accessible at their fingertips. It’s amazing how much more people pay attention to the details of their life when they have an “app” to store the data points in. All components of required content appear to be present, with headings and subheadings making for an organized content outline. The content and writing style appears logical, clear, and easy to...
Hi Julie, thanks for your informative post this week. We covered a similar topic for our early adulthood page. Our themes were parallel but didn’t seem redundant, which helps our overall website maintain its strength. I like that you used many references throughout the text. In this context, especially, utilizing science is of utmost importance. With the sheer number of apps available it is unfortunate how many don’t use strong science to support them. That being said, your page started off very strong with research backing everything. However, the sections covering the apps you chose to write about, as well as the advantages/disadvantages were lacking references to support the claims made. Your page layout is great, with clearly labeled sections and content that fits the topics. I found no spelling or grammar errors when I read through it. Your photos added a nice accent to the page and the videos were helpful as well. I know that finding good scientific/evidence-based videos can be ...