Hello
Julie,
I think that Endometriosis was the perfect topic
for this age group. I really liked your introduction and the video that
follows and how it explains what endometriosis actually is, and how it
affects the body. In your first paragraph, there is this sentence, “Endometriosis most
commonly involves your ovaries, fallopian tubes and the tissue lining your
pelvis.” I
believe that you forgot to place a second common after “fallopian tubes(,)” I would have liked to
see a little more of an explanation for why you ladies choose acupuncture as a
form of treatment. I know that the website has been messing up lately, but I do
not see the section where you explain how this treatment is affective. Maybe if
some statics were brought in to show how often this is used for this age group.
I am just missing the connection to the healthcare provider or how this
treatment should be used to be the most effective. I think your final video is
very informative and gives a lot of different aspects of how to treat this
condition. I enjoyed your section and look forward to seeing more of your work
as we finished these next couple of weeks! Great Job.
Cheers,
Brittany
Fredrick
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