Hello Julie, I think that Endometriosis was the perfect topic for this age group. I really liked your introduction and the video that follows and how it explains what endometriosis actually is, and how it affects the body. In your first paragraph, there is this sentence, “Endometriosis most commonly involves your ovaries, fallopian tubes and the tissue lining your pelvis.” I believe that you forgot to place a second common after “fallopian tubes(,)” I would have liked to see a little more of an explanation for why you ladies choose acupuncture as a form of treatment. I know that the website has been messing up lately, but I do not see the section where you explain how this treatment is affective. Maybe if some statics were brought in to show how often this is used for this age group. I am just missing the connection to the healthcare provider or how this treatment should be used to be the most effective. I think your final video is very informative and gives a...